Document B: In which the exact time for a cashier transaction
using the penny is measured, down to the exact second and the total of
additional time due to the penny is shown to approximate at about 4 hours a
year. In a year of 8765 hours, this seems hardly taxing, hardly problematic.
The true wasted time lies in the creation of such inconsequential
statistics.
Document E: This reveals the true national
indecision over an issue constituents would have you believe was impending, was
passionately shared by the masses. Many are opposed, or simply undecided which
raises the question: are scholars like Gore actually rectifying and returning a
nation's "wasted time" when said nation either either doesn't even
notice this time gone or doesn't even care to get back.
Document C: It is simply impossible to
eliminate any and all low denominator coins, as the document claims other
nations have-- the remaining nickel will simply assume the role. The goal seems
to be the invocation of a sense of international competition that could surely
play out on a more productive level.
I really like how you push the issue further than the prompt. Not only did you address the prompt by stating whether the penny should be removed from circulation, but you took it one step further to apply the idea to humanity (or specifically Americans) as a whole. Ending your thesis with a comment on tendencies to waste time arguing over nothing allows you to take the argument to the next level, exploring many different facets of a basic argument over a penny, and extending it to cover a broader topic. That is something quite impressive, especially given the amount of time you had. Also worth mentioning is your clear and concise explanations of your sources. Without rambling or becoming caught up in complicated explanations, I was able to know exactly how you were going to use each source and understand its effectiveness. Well done!
ReplyDelete-Caroline Caterini