An
eloquent, convincing writer is supposed to incite feelings of passion, pity and
respect in his readers. Conversely, William F. Buckley Jr., in his essay “Why
Don’t We Complain,” manages to evoke annoyance, exasperation and disgust
through his self-pitying soliloquy on the subject of American “passive
compliance.” Buckley undermines his own potentially effective argument by adapting
a tone of overwhelming self-admiration, and by attempting to support his ideas
with thoroughly unconvincing evidence.
William Buckley has an arrogant and
distinctly unappealing view of himself as the savior of the modern American
public, the courageous soul who will rescue citizens from complacency and
discomfort. All other Americans are hopelessly accepting, scared into silence,
a “supine breed” who “submit to… irrational vexations.” Buckley portrays
himself as the contrast to this national epidemic, claiming that he can “summon
the courage to complain,” as if this willingness to whine about trivial matters
make him somehow stronger or more insightful. This inflated sense of self harms
Buckley’s reliability as a narrator because his Platonic conception leads him
to view his own actions through a skewed, heroic lens. Instead of establishing
his authority on the subject of modern complacency, Buckley belittles the
general population and presents an indulgently flattering portrayal of himself,
in the process alienating himself from the reader.
Although Buckley thinks of himself
as superior to the majority of the public, he often adheres to the cultural
norm, and yet he still attempts to utilize these instances to strengthen his
argument. For example, instead of admitting culpability for his reluctance to
report an unfocused movie screen, he places blame on his fellow movie goers who
were “expecting someone else to take the initiative in going back to speak to
the manager.” Meanwhile, Buckley himself refused to address the issue because
he was sitting towards the front and assumed that someone else more conveniently
situated would complain, consequently aligning himself with the general mindset
of the public. Furthermore, the events he cites as “irrational vexations” are
so trivial that they seem comical; an overly warm train car; a “just out of
focus” movie screen; a tardy glass of milk; and other similarly ridiculous
complaints. Buckley renders his argument ineffectual by his flimsy evidentiary
support, as well as his admission that he is not especially different from the
rest of the American society that he disparages so thoroughly.
Buckley’s assessment of the general
public may be entirely valid. Maybe Americans have become lazy and content,
shying away from uncomfortable encounters instead of addressing nuisances,
because we have become accustomed to instant gratification and small amounts of
work for a large reward. Maybe the American spirit of hard work and ingenuity is
dead, and maybe the American public has killed it. Regardless, Buckley’s
frustratingly smug delivery of his opinions, coupled with the ridiculous
evidence given to support his claims, create an argument that is at once
obnoxious and questionable: ultimately, an argument that is ineffective.
Annie--First off, I like how you took a slightly different approach in focusing on how "Why We Don't Complain" was ineffective. That said, you also argued you point very well. Even though I have never read Buckley's essay, I felt myself growing annoyed with his apparent hypocrisy and self entitlement. You very nicely entwined your personal opinion with factual and textual support, which resulted in a very effective and interesting argument. Also, I love the wording, your Rhetorical Analysis flows smoothly and beautifully. Well done! -Caroline Caterini
ReplyDeleteI really like the idea that his hero complex blinds him to the fact that he truly is no different from the masses, and in turn, hinders real action. But perhaps these "irrational vexations" are exactly what he wants to cite-- society first letting the little, trivial things go and then the more major aspects. The seeds of complacency are planted at these lower levels, with "a just out of focus movie" and a hot train car, before they grow to consume what's above. In this culture of indifference, his smug attitude might be necessary-- as irritation and a stubborn drive to disprove are often the best stimulants.
ReplyDeleteMy favorite part of this is your conclusion- where you acknowledge that Buckley could have a legitimate argument had he used less self important methods. It really highlights how significant rhetorical effectiveness is.
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